A Short True Story–Based Upon An Actual Event…

by John Donnelly

John Donnelly
John Donnelly

Explosively erupting from head and face wounds, the blood created a slick surface upon the instruments delivering the blows. A mixture of cascading flesh particles and fluid descended onto the concrete floor. A slick red glaze pooled within the area of contact, destabilizing the movement of these assailants.

Scurrying about, the frenzied aggressors struggled to secure a stationary position from which they could strike their target. Manically jostling with one another to get their licks in, they would not be denied an opportunity to take aim at a ‘sweet spot’.

Unsteady as they wound up, putting all their might into the swings that followed, they launched themselves into a full scale offensive. The feverish commotion and compelling acts of violence caused some of them to slip and fall to the ground before their batons and nightsticks struck the mark. Screams, yelling and grunting type sounds emerged from these seven professionals, as the velocity and depth of their respirations escalated. These penetrating noises shook and reverberated throughout the steel barred enclosure.

Surprisingly the victim never uttered a sound, as the ferocity of said beating tore the clothes from his body. His muscular frame stood tall as he raised his arms up, opening his cuffed hands towards the heavens.

It appeared his refusal to allow the beating to crack him into shattered pieces on the ground, was an attempt to maintain some sense of dignity and self-respect. Not succumbing to their savagery was an incendiary element, it intensified and prolonged the barbarism.

Fatigue and exhaustion explicitly took hold of the antagonists as they bent forward at the waist, placing their hands, forearms and weapons across their knees.

Gasping and sucking for air, they looked up at the focus of their attention with anguish and alarm, an audible intonation had emerged from the area comprising this disfigured creature’s head. Although the mechanics of vocalization had been severely disabled, with whatever life remained, a firm penetrating cry came from the depths of this ‘denizen of the dark’s’ soul; deliberatively pleading: “Please stop. I’ve done nothing wrong”.

Could this possibly be so? What manner of provocation was worthy of the savagery set before me?

Accustomed to rough treatment and violence, I was taken aback and befuddled by what I had just witnessed. Frozen in the moment of now, my next move was uncertain.

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John Donnelly, a resident of Key Largo was born, raised and went to high school in the South Bronx. Upon graduation he was awarded several scholarships to college.  He chose to enlist in the United Sates Marine Corps. While serving in Vietnam John was wounded in action. He received two meritorious promotions, one during combat. Upon discharge and return to America, John had a difficult time transitioning back into civilian life. He found himself homeless for the next 4 years. As he worked out some troublesome concerns, he began to yearn to make some sense of his experiences via education. He sought and received his GI Bill benefits. He applied and was admitted to New York University. He later transfered to the University of Miami where he graduated on the President’s Honor Roll. John secured a teaching position at a Maximum Security Prison Facility for criminally insane adolescents. While working there he earned a Master of Science degree from Florida International University. He graduated Summa Cum Laude.

John spent the next 20 years teaching elementary and high school students, while doing some coaching and instructing as an adjunct college professor. John was the recipient of the Mayor Stephen P. Clark award, which recognized him as an “Outstanding Educator”. During this time he continued his work clothing, feeding and counseling the homeless. John has been acknowledged by the Disabled American Veterans, the Miami Vet Center and the Veterans Council of Monroe County for his efforts on behalf of homeless and addicted veterans.

Recently, John was privileged to spearhead the successful release of a wrongfully accused inmate who faced 3 life sentences, without the possibility of parole, for crimes that he did not commit. This young man has since been returned to his twin sons and graduated with honors from one of our nation’s premier vocational colleges. John continues to research and write on issues facing our ‘One Human Family’.

6 thoughts on “A Short True Story–Based Upon An Actual Event…

  1. John, Thanks man. Sometimes I get very depressed thinking about the human condition and the darkness that seems to lie within all of us. Someday I’ll post an essay I wrote back in the Abu Ghraib days that I think would interest you. The question that leaps into my mind in this instance is this: why can’t we all be like you John? Thanks again, PCM

  2. Jerome,

    Always appreciate your comments. Thanks much. I don’t know about everyone being like me. It might be a scary place.

    I’ve enjoyed reading and following the comments in this week’s edition. Many well-written and brilliantly put together ‘columns’.

    Although the subject matter was meticulously and artfully presented, I lack expertise in the topics that were addressed.

    Sometimes my silence is a better course of action.

    Again, your article was extraordinarily informative. I learned a lot from it. Your esteemed work and perspectives are held in high regard.

  3. Jerome,

    Always appreciate your comments. Thanks much. I don’t know about everyone being like me. It might be a scary place.

    I’ve enjoyed reading and following the comments in this week’s edition. Many well-written and brilliantly put together ‘columns’.

    Although the subject matter was meticulously and artfully presented, I lack expertise in the topics that were addressed.

    Sometimes my silence is a better course of action.

    Again, your article was extraordinarily informative. I learned a lot from it. Your esteemed work and perspectives are held in high regard.

  4. John, Thanks so much, but you underestimate your own ability to decode the world we live in. Something just and noble can be arrived to from many different directions. Don’t ever belittle your own contribution. I’m going to give you a heads up right now, for I will post an essay a week from Friday that might really interest you because you’ve been to war and know something about it. I’d be honored by your attention.

  5. John, I’m a little confused…Your title states this is a true event and is written as a chronicle of that event, yet you conclude in first person. Am I dense, or what? 🙂 Edify me, please…

  6. Alex,

    Good to hear from you. Always welcome your comments and insight. Your penetrating articles provides a sharply defined look at reality not often discussed. Thanks for your many valued contributions.

    The scene described through my eyes, is part of a book/screen play that I’ve been asked to write for interested publishers and producers. It is based on my experience with an actual event. It is part of a true story, which entailed the government’s determination to murder a man they knew to be innocent.

    Let me leave it at that for now….

    Blessings & Respect…

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